" A rough start and shaky phrasings get this story going into what eventually turns out to be a pretty decent story. Garth Nix's writing style still remains too meta for a third person children's book, at least for my taste. That is to say, I enjoy meta-fiction, but I don't enjoy reading a story that has random metaphors that doesn't add to the plot. His techniques aren't well defined until half-way through the story when the plot starts to flow. Even then, some chapters seem forced. It's as if Mr. Nix has an idea for a story, made an outline, and filled in the blanks loosely. I'm still trying to figure out how Mr. Nix received awards for his writing prowess. "
— Alan, 2/1/2014