" I have read every one of Michael Palmer's novels (and those by his son, Daniel) and am a fan, as can be evidenced by me rating all of them as 4-star novels. Only that kept me from rating this work as only a 2-star effort. In this book, Palmer writes about the military. It upsets and angers me when authors make mistakes because they lack familiarity with how the military is organized and operates. Other writers get it right by researching extensively. There are plenty of sources out there that could be consulted. As a retired active-duty Army officer, I surely would never presume to write a hospital, doctor, or medical insurance story without enlisting the expertise of doctors, nurses, administrators, etc. Making numerous, obvious errors devalues your work! "
— William, 2/7/2014