" Enjoyable fantasy with steampunky elements; I enjoyed the conceit that industry is powered by magic in the land of Wellmet, with urban decline explained by a decrease in the amount of magic available to Wellmet's wizards. Conn is an endearing main character, whose voice leads us through the majority of the story. The chapters which he narrates are much more compelling than the short snippets we read from the journal of Nevery, the wizard who somewhat unwillingly takes Conn on as an apprentice following Conn's attempt to steal his "locus magicalicus." The plot is familiar but mostly well-done; Conn is "the chosen one" (a la Harry Potter), meant to save Wellmet's magic from destruction. Our young hero recognizes the true villains early on, but cannot convince the arrogant Nevery to listen to him, leaving him to face the baddies on his own. Nevery does not have the gravitas, empathy, or perspective of Dumbledore; in general, the adult characters are not particularly well-drawn, especially the villains, whose motives are unclear. The mystery of the disappearing magic is too straightforward; as I said, Conn figures it out early in the book. The language has a few lovely quirks -- "keen-gleam eyes" (p. 5), "the wizard Nevery loom-doomed up before me" (p. 8), "steep, rain-dark streets" (p. 10). The explicit separation of the haves and have-nots at the demarcation of the river was also interesting; the have-not side of town, in which Conn grew up, had a Dickensian feel to it. "
— Kate, 2/3/2014