" Uggh, kind of like a quickly written 7th grade version of an indiana jones book. "The old wizard ran quickly through the bog then jumped over the rock" I'm sorry but this isn't good. I like to give people a chance but this is bad. I don't think the other reviews are real. Maybe try putting in a few details like a "green rock" instead of just "a rock". I would give 1/2 star if I am grading junior high. "
— Ben, 11/20/2017