" This was a good read, but I feel that it would have been much much more enjoyable if it had been about 300 or 400 pages shorter. It feels like every single breath that Cleopatra takes is described in excruciating detail, and I think a lot of the little details could have been cut out and the novel wouldn't have suffered for it. There are certain scenes that I felt warranted the excessive detail (ex. the first time she meets Cesear), but for the most part there was just overkill of detail. There is a section where George spends almost 3 pages trying to say the Cleopatra went for a swim. This swim is just a swim, it doesn't further the plot in any way, so why even mention it? Let alone spend 3 whole pages describing a pointless event. But if you have a lot of time on your hands and find Cleopatra interesting then I'd recommend this novel. "
— Vanessa, 2/14/2014