" Geoffrey Maguire has interesting and magically original plot ideas that get waylaid by his totally incomprehensible dialogue. He has this annoying habit of making his characters hold totally insane conversations that leave the reader (or at least me) totally floundering and confused. For instance, in Lost, the main character receives a voicemail from a (gay) man she has met very briefly at a group orientation for families considering international adoption. She returns his call to tell him she's out of town; she leaves a message telling him she's in London, here's the phone number where she's at, but NOT TO CALL HER. 1) why leave a number if you don't want him to call? 2) who says something like that, especially to a very nearly perfect stranger? 3) she doesn't really want to talk to him so why even bother paying the extravagent phone charges to call him in the first place?! Throughout Maguire's novels his characters do and say such incomprehensible and unaccountable things which always leave me with the vaugue, confused feeling of "what just happened?" by the time I complete the book. I usually leave feeling I enjoyed the book, but that I didn't really understand how we arrived from point A to point B. "
— Terri, 1/18/2014