" I give this a 3 if only because I really like the story it continues. But I have to complain about the continuing evidence that this book had very little editorial presence. I was able to skip about every three paragraphs of unnecessary, repetitious stream-of-anxiety-ridden-Jerzy-consciousness or repeated-for-the-sixth-time-block-of-exposition. I really can't say how many times I'd be reading yet another paragraph involuntarily making my brain go "blah blah blah blah blah" and then scan desperately for the next new or necessary word...and then find it on the next page. And while the plot, characters, and world continue to be interesting, there's also so many elements that didn't seem to be worked out very well (besides the fascinating wine-based system of magic)...and the pacing really has issues...but all this may just be due to the publishing industry's continued requirement for a trilogy rather than a tight, well-written single volume. $$$ It's true that I have high expectations of fantasies, but I feel I can't let this one off the hook for being genre fiction--it has too much potential. Ah well...I look forward to the rest of the story anyway. "
— Erin, 2/9/2014