" I fully agree with one of the other reviewers that this book is so disjointed that it takes real effort to plow through it. The author seems to have been infected with Emily Dickinson's syntax, and not in a good way. Why must she refer to Emily's neck (twice) as a "voice funnel"? One other difficulty, admittedly not of her making, is the Russian-novel-like name confusion over major characters Mabel (Mamma), Millicent, Martha (Mattie), and Maggie. Then there's Susan, Sue, and Sister. Also, after enduring much discussion of the editorial changes made in the various editions of Emily's poems, I hoped for at least a comment on what version was closest to authentic, but no. If it's there, it's buried in the footnotes, and I ran out of patience to dig it up. "
— Lynne, 2/4/2014