" It was definitely a steamy read so no complaints there. However, the way it was written - Keily just seemed to be "peer pressured" into this weird menage, so it doesn't seem healthy to me :) . First off, Mac starts off extremely annoying - keeping his distance, telling her how to dress (no short shorts) so as to not provoke him > why not?! He is her husband, should they not be indulging in their sexualities instead of restraining them?! So she is making him lunch, and he is outside working on the farm (?!) and she has to beg him to come and eat, but he is just SOOOOO aroused he can't bear to be near her?! Just have sex with your wife, what's the problem?!?!?! I just did not get why he couldn't be more sexual with her - why did he force himself to keep everything so "vanilla" for so long (married 3 years?), but then out of nowhere, so abruptly push her into being with another man when she was clearly unsure of it ! It just seemed (as someone already said) that he needed a lot of therapy (and not the sexual kind)! "
— Elena, 2/12/2014