" While beautifully written and beautifully imagined, I felt The Illumination lacked story and character development. It seemed a series of short stories around a central premise rather than a cohesive novel. I generally like novels that switch between the perspectives of multiple characters; however, the level of depth we are treated to in the characters lives in The Illumination never passes the surface level. Few of these characters change throughout their sections; I don't believe any change for the better. We are left with in the same sort of resolution-less apathy common in short stories. That coupled with forgettable characters who lack drive, heart, and resolution doesn't leave me with the kind of feeling I like to get from reading novels. I like to get to know characters better, live their lives through them. This is more a criticism of contemporary fiction than of Kevin Brockmeier in particular, but I don't care much to read the lives of damaged, sad individuals with nothing to lose and nothing to gain. We always have something to gain. "
— Heather, 2/12/2014