" OK, I can see what he was trying to do. But simply omitting punctuation and adding some bizarre CAPITALISATION does not a stream-of-consciousness masterpiece make. I could forgive it if it was aimed at children but I'm assuming, due to the language, it's not (unless the C-word is now part of the curriculum?). A decent enough story (well, it is lifted straight from Shakespeare) but there was just something disingenuous about the style that prevented me from becoming wholly engaged. "
— Karen, 1/23/2014