" Richard Evens took a cool idea, but ruined it. He fails to make me feel for the characters. He can't change the writing to show emotion. He tells me everything that's happening he doesn't show it. Poor writing, flat characterization, flat dialog ruined this book. Where was your editor Richard? This books needs much improvement, and looks more like a first draft than a publishable book. "
— C.l., 1/1/2014