" I almost decided to give this 3 stars, but I just didn't enjoy it enough. It wasn't terrible, it was just a little empty. I didn't particularly like any of the characters. They're all pretty flat in spite of their unfortunate situations, and I thought Lenore was incredibly dull. I was very intrigued by the idea behind this book, but it just doesn't achieve all that it could. It didn't really make me feel anything. On to the writing. The review at the front of the book describes it as "lyrical without being pretentious". I have to disagree. A lot of this book reads like a young author who wants you to know that he is well-read. "The sun is also rising, outside of my window..." Really? What's with the pointless name dropping? I've read that book too, and it doesn't make me impressive. I also really don't like the "Somewhere, a clock ticked. Somewhere, time disappeared" thing. It adds nothing, and it really makes no sense. Yeah, this book is pretentious. However, I think that Tohline has a lot of potential. I wish I could better articulate what it is that he DID get right with this book, because there are things about it that just feel good. I realize that this is Tohline's first novel, but I've decided not to rate it that way. It just feels like cutting him slack would be doing him a disservice. My rating would be much higher if I were taking that into account. "
— Emma, 1/27/2014