" There's potential here, but it bogs down in lots of telling instead of showing. There's also a lesson here that two authors don't necessarily make the book twice as good; instead, it seems to have led to uneven writing. The bones are good. The name-dropping, however, probably won't hold up over time -- and it certainly didn't translate across the pond. Much of my reading was flipping pages filled with references that meant nothing to me to get on with the plot. I liked seeing Izzy stand up to the corporate types, but I would have liked to cheer her on instead of thinking "Where did that come from?" Yes, there was mention of her having worked in London but nothing to show her business acumen. The connection between Izzy and Maddy was semi-believeable -- but at the expense of stereotyping the English country set. Did it have to be all outsiders against the native bullies? I don't want to nitpick the book because it was "okay" -- but not I book I'd tell friends they have to read. "
— Lin, 1/29/2014