" The first half seemed rather flat and lifeless, especially for a story that instantly plunges into the action. Mostly, that start lacked any focus character with any recognizable background, relying almost exclusively on combat action description. There are only a couple of characters who rise above a name and squadron callsign, and most of those are from central casting (the clever Admiral who's hamstrung by government bureaucracy returns, and that's abut it for his personality.) The second half catches on a little better, though it still lacks more than one 3D character (and Gray is pretty classic archetype, too.) But at least second half lifts the story to something with a little more heart, making the overall work readable if you can surmount the first hundred pages. "
— G33z3r, 1/22/2014